One who loves nature must see Yeni Şakran. The location of this town makes
there more historical. It is close to many ancient sites.
Although there are
so many holiday resorts around it, it remains being safe and small. Maybe sometimes
you are bored because of its being small and safe. But there is very relaxing
place. If you want walk there is two way. You can walk along seashore or path. When
you choose seashore, you walk on the sand and listen the sounds of sea. On one
side you can see sea extending to the horizon on the other side you will sea
villas and gardens. When you choose the path you will walk among the olive
trees. At this time the smell of olive is with you. In either case, you are in the middle of nature.
If you go Yeni Şakran you must eat ‘Şakran
Böreği’. At first sight it is like an ordinary börek. But after eating, you understand
it is a special recipe.
So, I think everybody
who loves sea, nature, olive briefly Aegean must go and see Yeni Şakran. You will
love its people as much as it.
Aliağa/İzmir
My dear friend, I think you wrote all paragraphs that are need to be in an essay. And I see that you used descriptive words.Actually I don't know this place but when I read this essay I can think something about here. So now I have a clear mental picture. But there are some grammatical mistakes. If you check your essay again you will se them.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, I will check it :)
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